Poem Without A Name
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When you feel alone, against all ...
when there is no one who can help you
when there is no one who wants to help you
when a friend betrays you ...
when they are not there for you...
when they don't understand you ...
When you are feeling sorrow ...
When you find yourself crying ...
When you stop dreaming ...
When you feel that you cannot go on
When you find it difficult to breath, and feel the beat of your heart ...
When they criticize you and when they despise you ...
When you realize that someone has abandoned you...
when you count on a friend and find out the friendship is only an utopia ...
When you trusted in love and had your heart broken ...
when you walk alone with no one by your side...
When you don't want to see anybody ...
When you close yourself off to the world and it seems that life is like a ship that has sunken beneath the sea ...
When someone discourages you...
When you cry and cannot feel your own strength ...
When life seems to lose every meaning...
When your heart does not find beauty while watching the sunset descend magically, magnifying, yellow and orange.
When a rose does not make you emotional any longer...
When you reminisce in old memories...when love was visible, where rubies and diamonds were made of velvet, when you danced with joy... when a sweet gentle word made you smile...
When the darkness becomes your Lair to defend yourself from the world,
to defend yourself from your emotions,
to defend yourself from fear,
to defend yourself from love,
to defend yourself from other dreams that will be broken,
keep on going forward, do your best...
give it your all...
run...
jump the highest obstacle...
swim the most thunderous of the seas...
Ride the storm, its surging waves, single vessel on your own...
fly, regain your broken wings...
head to the brightest star, go always higher, reach up high without ever looking down...
smile, wait, open your heart to others...
watch the Sun, l see its colors,
imagine a world in black and white and discover how lucky we really are ...
love, wait! it seems risky, plunge headfirst without fear...
dream, do it,
because without them we cease to exist, if we stop dreaming no one will find us...
live, because there is only one life... time... no other second occasion...
don't be afraid, understand courage, If you must say something, say it... it is time, if you need to give a kiss don't hold back, love... one life time...one short journey...one precious moment ... on the wrong path, abandon it ... say it... and if you find the right way, a new way ...one that you abandoned long ago but you never realized it, don't hesitate to take it...
Because at the end of the road, just around the corner, there is someone who is waiting for you.
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Love your poem its really inspirational and it really reminds me of me!
Beautiful! It touches the heart....
I voted up and beautiful!
Terri
I like it..
I am sure we can all relate to the feelings you brought out in this poem at some point in our lives..
Thank you.
Yes, there is always someone waiting for us and loving us. I like this very much.
You ve a history with fame. Great poet you ve become. I admire your work. Bravo!
Such beautiful poem. Its deep and true.
I love it and voting it up.
Love it! . You know how to express your words even when it comes to writing poety. I love it. Beautiful and inspirational.
Well done Jang!
Thanks Jangaplanet. You've written a very beautiful, emotional yet motivational poem. Great Hub. I'm voting you up.
Powerful words! Thank you for sharing! Looking forward for more...
Your Poem is written in such a simplified manner and yet very emotional and beautiful at the same time and i find it so sincere of you! There's something special about you, i don't know what it is but whatever it is just keep doing it. I am going through most of the things you just described here and was searching online for some kind of comfort or answers and found this poem just now. I cried reading through this because i'm totally at roads end and by the time i was through it gave me hope.
I believe that God is using you in a great way.
Thank you so much
A wonderful thought for anyone to say each day they are blessed with a new day. Virginia is very lucky to have you in her life, especially in her time of need. You've written a very beautiful & inspiring poem for her and at the same time we can all relate to those feelings of despair. I hope she's doing better.
Merits a beautiful!
Eluisa it was nice talking with you last night. It was awhile since we spoke. Thanks for stopping by to read as well. Yes shes doing well!
I appreciate the comment.
I will read this over and over again as it inspires me and sums up how I'm feeling right now, and the emotions of two of my family members who are currently battling with injustice.
Really helps!
Thanx
It's my pleasure Jangy:)
She'll get through it!
I wish I can write like that! Beautiful,moving and inspiring. Your poem touched my heart.
Brilliant I loved it :)
I applaud you! Very beautiful. Your words inspired me.
Inspiratioonal , and very Lovely , i voted up ,awesome,beautiful , thank you for the read:) have a blessed day !:)
I had to share your poem with my friends.
Thank you!
beautiful thank you for sharing
I loved this!! Very inspirational and- agh! I'm speechless! I absolutely LOVED it!
Thankyou
Ty so much for the comment Cresentmoon, appreciate it:)
Thanks loads Paty for your incredibly kind comment.
That's encouraging! You have a way with words. I wrote poetry too but I intend to keep them. Who knows I published it? Lol---
blog8 thanks, It warms a great deal to hear it. Thank you for your comment regarding this particular poem. :)
Wonderful, I like it! I am very much interested to read your other hubs and this I shall do shortly.
Voted Up & Awesome.
Best Wishes,
Kamalesh
Voted Beautiful!
Thanks Chrisam01, appreciate you stopping by.
very nice!
Thanks PDXK!
you're welcome. keep up the good work!
I thought it was beautiful and inspiring. This was exactly what I was searching for! A poem the reflects my situation. Thanx!
Very touchy poem with lots of depth. I find it very suited for my situation. It makes me emotional yet gives me so much hope. Brilliantly written.
DavyJones02 9 months ago
I thought it was beautiful! keep it up